One day there was a girl. She hates living at home with her family. It’s not that she didn't love her family. They didn't love her. Everyday she wakes up, goes to school, and comes back home to go to bed, because her family doesn't want her to be home. Her family leaves her at home for multiple hours at a time, but she doesn't care, because her boyfriend treats her right.
Or does he?
It all started one morning on his birthday. They were texting as usual, but she didn't tell him she was coming over. All she said was,"Hey baby, happy birthday-it’s been a year and a half, love you no matter what." He replied back with," Thanks babe, you made my day, love you too." He didn't know she had a surprise for him. Later that day, she snuck out of her house because her mom wasn't home yet.
She goes to her boyfriend’s room. Where she find her boyfriend and mom in bed together..... She dropped the flowers and chocolates. Her eyes filled with tears, she was disgusted how could her boyfriend do that to her. She said, how could you do this to me-I loved you and I thought you loved me." The boyfriend said," I didn't think you would find out like this." Before he had time to stop her.... she jumped. She was rushed to the hospital, the boy came along.
The doctor told him she only had an hour to live. The boy was devastated. He said to the girl," I LOVE YOU WITH ALL OF MY HEART." The girl grabs his hand and says," I LOVE YOU TOO." She wasn't grasping anymore. The doctors pronounced her dead. The boy was filled with so much gilt and anger. He got home, and grabbed the gun from the cabinet. The last words he said were," IM SORRY."
3 comments:
That was a very depressing story but I loved how it ended like when the girl died he went home and shot him self it was so sad but so good. Great job!!!!
I liked the way I ended it it was like a cliff hanger. I think I did good.
Cool. Depressing, but cool.
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