Thursday, September 14, 2017

Life is like a river

Life is like a river...
Cold yet satisfying 
Its natural beauty has its flaws too
Life is like a river...
Its windy, few bumps in the road
The word "River" has a ring to it, like LIFE.
Life is like a river...
A bittersweet tragedy
Its cold touch is like those nights you spend by yourself, but you like it, you like being alone
Life is like a river...
The best thing that could possibly happen
Life is like a river...
No words could possibly describe it, because they're all so different
Life is like a river...

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

That was very descriptive. Great work.

Anonymous said...

That is a really good poem I really like it.

Anonymous said...

This was great!!!!! The first three sentences really inspired me.

-Sam P. Oppa

Anonymous said...

Great job! You should post more poems. That was really good!

Anonymous said...

Great poem. Good ring to it.

Gibson Girl said...

This poem is deep, like a river. I love it.