Monday, September 11, 2017

Life

Life is like a river because no one moment can be repeated. Life is like a river because you only have one chance to do something great or terrible. That one moment could slip away in the blink of an eye.

Life is super fragile and it could break at any second, life is a beautiful thing because lives are taken and given every day. Everything is made by someone with a life, designed, invented, named, nothing in this world has been left unturned or left alone. Life is the best thing in the world.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Hey, I like that, you are right.

Anonymous said...

I love how you said life is really fragile because it is so true.

Anonymous said...

This is very intelligent. You did great showing your thinking. It's very beautiful work, did it take you a while?

Anonymous said...

The way you repeated the word 'life' multiple times throughout the poem was really great. What you said was so true!